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There is the URL for the page with the ruined project on it. Crappy assed thing.
Starting off, my town was abandoned, so they wouldn't have a Princess or Knights just wandering around. Their wouldn't be any problems with Tomatoes because theyd idn't have tomatos, they came from America. The names are totally outta place considering this is Medieval times and most names were taken from the bible. 'Todd' wouldn't have a fear of dogs AND think he was invincible. That's just stupid. He also wouldn't have a baby blanket with him or sword named 'mr. mighty' at the very least he would have named it King or Sir mighty. And TOdd would be lucky if he could read or SPEAK proper english little less write 2 books and what would he write them on?? The only books around were most about God.
Secondly Princess Tori? Kiss my big fat half cuban ass. If the 'King' wanted so much for her, why would he be raffling her off? Please now. I wasn't aware that poor Princencess in Abandoned villages were fasion designers.
Next, since when do little abandoned villages in BFE give announcements about giving away their daughter at dawn in a tournement for the finest men? She wouldn't be going to his house and especially seeing that his house wouldn't be anywhere near because he's a Knight and he travels. A 'rather bright light' would NOT be shining from his 'Livign Room Window' because unless he has super ultra candles or had one up on Franklin that we don't know about the brightest he'd get would be a flicker. And Jesus say Christ because they wouldn't be doing that!!! It's STUPID!!
GRAH!!
I hate people who do that kind of thing..
There is the URL for the page with the ruined project on it. Crappy assed thing.
Starting off, my town was abandoned, so they wouldn't have a Princess or Knights just wandering around. Their wouldn't be any problems with Tomatoes because theyd idn't have tomatos, they came from America. The names are totally outta place considering this is Medieval times and most names were taken from the bible. 'Todd' wouldn't have a fear of dogs AND think he was invincible. That's just stupid. He also wouldn't have a baby blanket with him or sword named 'mr. mighty' at the very least he would have named it King or Sir mighty. And TOdd would be lucky if he could read or SPEAK proper english little less write 2 books and what would he write them on?? The only books around were most about God.
Secondly Princess Tori? Kiss my big fat half cuban ass. If the 'King' wanted so much for her, why would he be raffling her off? Please now. I wasn't aware that poor Princencess in Abandoned villages were fasion designers.
Next, since when do little abandoned villages in BFE give announcements about giving away their daughter at dawn in a tournement for the finest men? She wouldn't be going to his house and especially seeing that his house wouldn't be anywhere near because he's a Knight and he travels. A 'rather bright light' would NOT be shining from his 'Livign Room Window' because unless he has super ultra candles or had one up on Franklin that we don't know about the brightest he'd get would be a flicker. And Jesus say Christ because they wouldn't be doing that!!! It's STUPID!!
GRAH!!
I hate people who do that kind of thing..
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Date: 2002-01-16 01:29 pm (UTC)can we say BAD?!
not only in the sense of what you mentioned above, but the grammar, sentence structure, tenses, and predictability ABSOLUTELY SUCKED. how much more cliche can you get?
what a bunch of weirdos